This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Lily, love your work. The diagram is specific with what ingregients you used in the reaction process but maybe if you wrote it in the bottom box also with what happened like describe the chemical reaction of it, did it smell? and give off a gas? did it change colour? Keep up the good work. xo
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Hi lily
ReplyDeleteI love your google drawing it's amazing everything works together. Maybe next time you could make arrows to show things clearly.
- Sandra
Hi Lily
ReplyDeleteLove your google drawing it's cool how everything makes one thing. Maybe next time you could make lines to make it clearly.
That is really cool lily I think you need to make the colurs different that is really coll lily
ReplyDeleteHi Lily, love your work. The diagram is specific with what ingregients you used in the reaction process but maybe if you wrote it in the bottom box also with what happened like describe the chemical reaction of it, did it smell? and give off a gas? did it change colour? Keep up the good work. xo
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