WALT write a description about Antarctica.
Winter Wonderland
Winter Wonderland
The coolest place in the world is the coldest place. It is mostly two colours white for nearly everything and blue for the sky and sea but there is always some part that is black.
The wind is freezing,bone-chilling and windy with the windchill The wind blows all the time. It pierces many layers of clothing and numbs your ears, fingers and toes. It would not be long until hypothermia sets in.
It would feel like a ice block that is really cold.
I see a sparkling white world with mountains and nothing in the distance .
I hear waves crashing into the rocks and birds squawking like they’re having a party in the air while the bones of the ice are cracking and the wind sound’s like an owl.
I think Antarctica is an amazing place. I think it would be an extraordinary place to go but I would not like to live there.
I am impressed with this writing Lily. When I read it I get very clear pictures in my mind. You have kept to the writing structure of a description very well. Maybe next time you could include an original image you have created to support your writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your Comment I will try that next time
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