This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi lily, my name is Isabel, I'm a Year six at St Bernadette's School. I now have learnt a lot about killer whales from your slide. Maybe next time you could add in some pictures to your slideshow of a killer whale so people understand what they look like. Are killer whales your favorite sea animal?
Hi Lily my name is Antonette I am a year 6 student in St.Bernadette's Primary School. I really like the way you put in links so people could know more facts about Killer Whales. Maybe next time you could check where you put in your pictures so then it is not in the way when people are reading. Keep up the good work Lily!
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Hi lily, my name is Isabel, I'm a Year six at St Bernadette's School. I now have learnt a lot about killer whales from your slide. Maybe next time you could add in some pictures to your slideshow of a killer whale so people understand what they look like. Are killer whales your favorite sea animal?
ReplyDeleteHi Lily my name is Antonette I am a year 6 student in St.Bernadette's Primary School. I really like the way you put in links so people could know more facts about Killer Whales. Maybe next time you could check where you put in your pictures so then it is not in the way when people are reading. Keep up the good work Lily!
ReplyDeleteHi lily I like how you put bright colors but next time you could make it go faster to the next slide by lily good job.
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