In our learning for the poem we had to put Emotion words, Alliteration to make our poem cool and a simile we had to look at the class, touch the walls, smell the air, listen to the noise and feel how you feel about.
I feel nauseous with excitement walking into a new chapter of my life.
I hear screaming of excitement playing on the new playground.
I see smiles shining and sparkling all over the school.
I smell the clean and refreshing fragrances as the new furniture.
I touch all different textures, soft, rough, rugged, all kinds on the walls.
I feel proud to be able to put other people’s lives in my hands at road patrol.
By Lily
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