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Hi Lily, I'm Nika from St Bernadette's School. I like how you introduced it with a question. Maybe next time you could explain how to tell difference between a stick and an insect . Why did you decide to research a stick insect?
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Hi Lily, I'm Nika from St Bernadette's School. I like how you introduced it with a question. Maybe next time you could explain how to tell difference between a stick and an insect . Why did you decide to research a stick insect?
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